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Monday 17 March 2014

Monday Quick Writes

If I could be an animal
If I could be an animal I would chose a whale. I would be a whale because whales are one of my favorite animals. It would be so cool if I could be a whale because I'm big and if someone try to attack me I can scare them away.I would like to be a blue whale because it's the biggest animal in the sea. Some animals in the water are scared of blue whales. They like to eat meat.

2 comments:

  1. Hi A.J hope you're doing well at school and listening to Mrs Miller! Thanks for teaching me more about blue whales and keep it up!! Love From Uncle Troy and cousins Talalelei and Peneha in England

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  2. Wow, I don't think you would fit in our classroom if you were a blue whale! Great sentences AJ. I like the way you have used capital letters and fullstops on all your sentences.

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