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Monday 7 April 2014

Monday Quick Writes

MY SUPER HERO!

There's a boy name Marty Douglas Jr and all his life he would like to go to the future and the past. One day his friend Doc Emmett Brown told him to come and meet near the mall. Doc was older than Marty. He was 52 years old. When Marty got there Doc was standing next to a car. A really weird looking car. He told Marty it was a time machine. A little while later there was two men coming down in a car very fast. One  pointed a gun at Doc. Then the man started shooting. Marty was angry and also scared. So he got in the time machine and drove away fast.10 seconds later the car disappeared and the two bad men crashed into a shop.

The car and Marty appeared somewhere else. He appeared right next to house. He felt really weird so he drove off. He stopped a little while later to take a nap. He woke up and remembered about how Doc died.He saw some newspaper and went to look what year is it and he was shocked. It was the year 1955.He wanted to figured out why those bad man killed Doc. He went and wandered off and saw a man that looked like Doc but younger. It looked like that he was in a gang.It looked like they were planning to kill someone. So Marty started to spying at the gang.Doc looked really mean. Then the leader of the gang told the gang that they were going to kill some one and when the leader told who it was Doc knew who it was. It was one of Doc's closest friends. He told the leader that he was not going to be in the gang anymore and he was going to be good now on. Then the leader was very angry with him and told him that he was going to kill him.Now Marty knows why those two bad men killed Doc. 


Then Marty ran to Doc and told him that the leader of the gang wasn't lying. So Doc put on a bullet proof vest and he will wear it everywhere but one day he forgot about him getting killed and toke it off on accident and Doc never noticed and when Marty came back to 2014 he knew that he was back but when he went to the mall to look at Doc he saw the two men shooting and then the two men chasing Marty in the time machine and when he saw the two men crash he ran to Doc and see if he was okay but when he got there he was dead. Marty was about to cry but Doc lifted his head up and told Marty how he survived. He told Marty that he remembered that a young familiar boy told himself that he was going to die.Then Doc started to say that Marty was his super hero and Doc bought him a costume to look like a super hero and they told each other that if they were in trouble they would help each other out.make the brake

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  2. Great story Neph.... I'm really impressed by the way you tell your story. Well done, keep it up :

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  3. Great writing AJ. I like the way you have organised your ideas into paragraphs.

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