Stretched sentence:
Who: The boy laughed.
What: The boy laughed hysterically.
When: In the evening the boy laughed hysterically.
Where: At the campfire in the evening the boy laughed hysterically.
Why: At the campfire in the evening, the boy laughed hysterically after seeing his friend slip in the mud and fall on his face.
DRAFT Sentence
At the campfire in the evening, the boy laughed hysterically after seeing his friend slip in the mud and land on his face.
This is my stretched sentence and my DRAFT sentence that I made with my buddy Thomas. For our stretched sentence we used the 5 W's. After that we use DRAFT to make our sentence better. We also use simple sentences, compound sentences and complex sentences. To do compound and complex sentence we used FANBOYS and AAWWUBBIS.
Hi son,
ReplyDeleteWhat a big difference a stretched and DRAFT sentence makes to describe something. What does DRAFT, FANBOYS and AAWWUBBIS mean?
Mama