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Monday, 10 July 2017

Winter Learning Journey - Day 6 Activity 1

For this activity I had imagine that I have never been to New Zealand before and I was on the first waka (canoe) to arrive at Shag Point (one of five places in the South Island that Maori people settled. I then have to write a poem about what I would feel when I arrived.

Discovered new land that has never seen before,
I couldn't wait to get off my waka and explore.
As I went to go up and stand on the sand,
I had a wonderful view of this beautiful land.
I was so happy that we somewhere new to live,
we have this whole land to ourselves it is really massive.



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9 comments:

  1. Mele10 July 2017 at 14:32

    Hi Aj, I have done the same task as you you but different poem. I really love the way you used some rhyimng at the end of your sentences. Rhyming makes the poem more better.
    Keep up the great work!

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  2. Sanujan10 July 2017 at 15:58

    Hi Aj. This is really good. I had also done this activity it was pretty fun. You have done a amazing work. Keep it up.

    From Sanujan

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  3. daniel10 July 2017 at 16:27

    Hello AJ
    This poem of yours if really good. I like how you rhymed the words land, sand, explore and before - it made your poem a lot better! Keep up the amazing work!
    Daniel

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  4. Zahra10 July 2017 at 19:02

    Hi AJ,
    I was very intrigued by your poem. It was very interesting and I liked how each sentence had a rhyming word at the end.
    - Zahra

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  5. Calvin11 July 2017 at 21:40

    Hi AJ
    I really enjoyed reading your poem I think that it was really interesting I also liked how you pretended that you have never been to New Zealand, and also you hooked me in. I would love to see you do another one of these next time in the term 4 holidays. Good job Keep up the great work !

    - Calvin

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  6. Chavda12 July 2017 at 10:08

    Hi AJ
    I am so happy that you are doing the Winter learning journey.

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  7. Unknown12 July 2017 at 10:49

    Kia Ora AJ!

    This is a fabulous poem! It's clear that you would be very excited to discover a new country and be the first to get out of the waka and explore! I think I'd be a little bit nervous to get out of the waka, not knowing what might happen, but there's also so many new things to discover!

    Wonderful wiring AJ! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your blog :)

    Nicky :)

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  8. Ohhsen13 July 2017 at 20:27

    Hi AJ. I really like your poem. I like how you have got rhyming couplets. I also like how you have added what you had to do. Keep up the great work.

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  9. Eric19 July 2017 at 11:34

    Hi AJ,
    This really great poem. I like that at the end it has rhyming words. Well Done!
    Eric

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